Creative Writing wk1

This week we have been learning how to create a piece of writing using a picture to help us. First we had our class  on what the picture was about then we brainstorm some adjectives finally we started writing. I am sharing it with you please leave a comment. Thanks!




 Wiki 1 Wāhanga 2 Writing starter We are going to another planet far, far away this week! Think about using your senses. Smell, taste, hear, feel, see. Remember to use correct punctuation and spelling. Remember to use similes, and adjectives. Use correct sentences.

 The day has come where the people from Mars has arrived to the place we call Earth. We were all happy that they are here but we did not no what place they were going to. But they put on social media that they were going to America just for JoJo siwa's birthday and to go to the slime fest with vip tickets. They looked so hideous but we do not care one because they smell so good second reason they can live on Mars. But the leader of the people that are called the breathers. They had names but there were too many of them. We called them breathers 1 2 3 and they love it so that is easier for us and they had hats with numbers on the hats. After Jojo siwa's birthday and the slime fest they came to New Zealand and taught us how to breathe on Mars and we went to Mars and we lived happily ever after the end.